What Everyday Communicators Can Learn from On Writing Well
Lena was drafting a complaint email to her landlord about a leak that had been ignored for two weeks, and the message had somehow grown to six paragraphs full of phrases like "I am writing to formally express my continued concern regarding the aforementioned maintenance issue." She read it back and felt tired just looking at it, and she was the one who'd written it. Her partner glanced over and asked what she actually wanted to happen. She said it out loud, plainly: fix the leak by Friday or she'd call a repair service and deduct the cost. That sentence was clearer than anything in the draft. She deleted five of the six paragraphs, kept the facts and the one plain request, and sent it in two minutes. It felt almost rude in its shortness after the formal version, but it was the version she actually meant, and the landlord responded that same afternoon.
The whole book, compressed
This edition works through 4 core lessons — take them one at a time, not all at once.
What's different for your conditions
Tap whichever ones sound like you. Nothing here is sent or saved — it's just for your own noticing.
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The core lessons, applied to you
Clutter is the enemy in the emails and messages you send daily
Someone writes a customer service email padded with phrases like "I wanted to reach out to see if it might be possible to potentially inquire about a refund" instead of simply asking for the refund. The representative has to read the message twice to find the actual request, which slows down a reply that should have been immediate. Practice: Before sending any request, write the single plain sentence that states exactly what you want, and put it first. Add any necessary context in a short sentence after it, rather than building up to the request through several hedged ones.
Before sending any request, write the single plain sentence that states exactly what you want, and put it first. Add any necessary context in a short sentence after it, rather than building up to the request through several hedged ones.
Clarity of writing requires clarity of thought about what you actually want
Someone drafts a text to a friend about a scheduling conflict, hedging with "no worries either way, whatever works" while actually having a real preference they're avoiding stating. The vague message forces three more texts back and forth to establish what was true from the start. Practice: Before writing a message about a plan or a disagreement, write down privately what you actually want to happen. Send that plain version, or a kind version of it, instead of a hedged one designed to avoid seeming difficult.
Before writing a message about a plan or a disagreement, write down privately what you actually want to happen. Send that plain version, or a kind version of it, instead of a hedged one designed to avoid seeming difficult.
Revise ruthlessly, even on a two-line message
Someone fires off a frustrated email in the heat of the moment, and it goes out full of extra clauses and repeated points that make the actual complaint harder to take seriously. The recipient responds defensively to the tone rather than addressing the actual issue. Practice: Write the message, then wait a few minutes and read it once purely to cut repeated points and extra words. A shorter, calmer message is usually read as more reasonable, not less serious.
Write the message, then wait a few minutes and read it once purely to cut repeated points and extra words. A shorter, calmer message is usually read as more reasonable, not less serious.
Personality survives simplicity in everyday messages
Even a two-line email carries something of the person who wrote it, and a plain, direct message usually reads as more genuine than a formal one copied from habit. Lena's short version to her landlord sounded more like an adult stating a fact than the six-paragraph version had, even though it said less. Clarity in everyday writing isn't about sounding official — it's about sounding like yourself, saying the one thing you actually mean.
Being direct can occasionally read as blunt or impatient, especially in personal messages where warmth matters as much as clarity, so cutting every hedge isn't always the right call. The workable balance is to keep one warm, human sentence and cut the rest of the hedging around it, rather than treating politeness and plainness as opposites.
Name one thing, honestly
Think of the last message you sent that took longer to write than it should have — what was the one plain sentence buried inside it?
Good. Now look back at the "Try this" line under whichever lesson feels most connected to what you just wrote, and treat that as this week's actual assignment — not all 4 at once.
The practices from this edition
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Run this for seven days
Write the message, then wait a few minutes and read it once purely to cut repeated points and extra words. A shorter, calmer message is usually read as more reasonable, not less serious.