Dr. Wallace's Favorite Mental Models
Why one named, pictured person in trouble moves us more than a thousand people described only as a number — and why that number sometimes moves us less the bigger it gets.
Situation: A nonprofit's year-end appeal cites "9.4 million people facing food insecurity in our region this winter." Open rates are fine. Donations are flat year over year.
Applying the model: The appeal is emotionally correct but perceptually invisible — a number that large doesn't compute as a feeling. The team rewrites the lead with one identified family: first name (with permission), one photo, one specific obstacle ("the bus route to the food bank was cut in March"), and one concrete ask tied to that family's situation. The regional statistic moves from the headline to a single supporting line near the bottom, framed as "and families like theirs, multiplied by thousands."
| Stage | Statistic-led version | Identified-victim version |
|---|---|---|
| Open | "9.4 million in need" | "Elena's bus route to food was cut in March" |
| Emotional response | Flat, abstract | Immediate, specific |
| Scale, honestly stated | Upfront | Present, but secondary |
| Illustrative result | Baseline giving | Meaningfully higher response in the team's A/B test |
This is a composite, illustrative scenario built to show the mechanism — not a specific published case study. The general pattern (identified-victim appeals outperforming purely statistical ones) is well documented; exact lift varies widely by cause, audience, and execution.
Answer a few questions and build a ready-to-use prompt for turning a statistic you have into an identified-victim-aware version of your message.
This is the portable skill version of this model — written so you can hand it to any AI assistant and get the same thinking applied to your own writing.
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